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Please advise for illustration!

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ASK first use therefore when there is a mismatch etc. there is no excuse.

It has been a month since I began using Crista
Because there are no people watching the picture around us and saying impressions and advice
Even trivial things like corrections and anxious points do not care so I'd appreciate your advice.
The theme is the hero of Persona 5

Published date : 5 years ago

Updated date : 5 years ago

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  • Not applicable
    5 years ago
    There is no meaning because there is no correct answer even if you say the existing character in a huge manner, but if there is unnaturalness
    Although the front of the black jacket is fitted to the body in the opened state, it seems that the front button does not seem to reach ....
    Texture of the fabric is highly appreciated.
    Next person please.
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  • 5 years ago
    I thought about it, but I feel I'm too tall.
    I do not know well so I'm sorry if it's such a character ....
    As periodic wrote, the texture of the fabric is highly appreciated.
    Next person please.
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  • 5 years ago
    Since the style frequently uses red and monotone, why do not you add it a bit more to BG?
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  • 5 years ago
    I do not know the illustration,
    If the hand is out of the screen, you will receive an unstable impression.
    Hands are an important element of emotional expression.
    It is not a story to rewrite it and put it in the screen,
    It is the story of the first composition stage.
    Next person please
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  • 5 years ago
    I think that it is better to draw hair because the texture of the fabric is written by the other person.
    I can appreciate only with the impression that I saw it because I do not know the characters, but somehow
    I see my body like a torso length.
    If you are the next person, please please.
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  • 5 years ago
    Because we had the opportunity to talk with the person who actually played "Persona 5" (lover?)
    I took the opinion of that person.

    ■ I feel that it is smart as the shadow is thin
    ■ Correction of this image is a bit irritating. I can not correct it there because my face has not appeared because I have masked it
    Because I do not copy it to my hands I feel honestly unstable
    ■ If you write in color I think that it would be better to shadow shadows a bit more
    (Because the shadow of clothes and even the original is written firmly)
    ■ I am tall because it is good, but the size of clothes ...
    ■ Is it a pattern that consciously consciously made a little thinner?

    Because it was that it is, the picture drawn taking in them is the lower right.

    ● The reason why it is notchy is that it is a jacket. The upper part is perfect although the lower part is bulging.
    → I inflated the upper part and put a gap between the green fabric and the black jacket.
    ● I expressed the wind by taking wide of the waist. I do not mess with my face, but my face looks relatively small.
    ● I was conscious of symmetry so that it can be seen by the red diagonal line. Please pay attention to the collar.
    I tried putting a hand in the composition. Again the balance is easy to take.
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  • 5 years ago
    It is also in the answer of Ninose Yasunori-sama and d_kokubun-sama, but because the hand protrudes from the screen
    The balance will be worse. It may have happened that this time by chance this time
    If I am not good at drawing hands and I feel like I do not want to draw as much as possible, I'm pretty bad
    I think part can not be overcome.
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  • 5 years ago
    Everyone, thank you very much for your advice and praise.
    There is no opportunity for anyone to feel comfortable or pointed out to anyone so far, which point is better for my picture
    Also, I was in a state of straying without understanding what the problem was
    I would like to devote ourselves to the advice of everyone.

    Hello periodic,
    Thank you for your advice and praise. I think that I did not draw the structure of the clothes properly.
    I was certainly pointed out that it is hard to comment if it is a picture of an existing character. If you have the next opportunity
    At that time I would like to make it creative.

    > Only Mr. chan ▲ ○
    Certainly the head may be a bit too high. Thank you for pointing out words and compliments.

    > Happy Birthday
    I felt that the person who was devised such as putting the effect of red on BG consciously with the style of the original can also project as an illustration as an original image as well.
    Thanks for the advice.

    > Mr. Yoshinori Ninose
    The story that it is better to change the composition is scales from the eye.
    When drawing a picture from the next I think that I will conscious of making a composition to put in my hands.
    Thank you for your advice.

    > Apple Apple,
    Thank you for pointing out words and compliments.
    I think that the length of the torso is too long ... I will care about this area and I will make improvements.
    Because drawing personal hands is not good as drawing a hand
    I think that I will make a conscious mind to make a composition with hands and decide the composition.

    Hello> d_kokubun
    Thank you for pointing out corrections and easy to understand. Thanks also to your friends for advice
    If you compare it with the one you corrected in this way, the collar length etc. of the clothes are not symmetrical
    I understand. I think that I will draw with the structure of clothes in mind.
    I think that I will improve one by one, such as choosing a shadow color a little more clear.
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  • Not applicable
    5 years ago
    Excuse me for re-appearance.
    Since it was a touch called an existing character, I told it not to dare to think that other people would be mentioned about similarities that are not similar.

    Although d_kokubun talks about "symmetry", in theory it is desirable to place parts of the face based on the "midline"
    It is not "nasal muscle-friendly face" but the nose bridge appears to be twisted.

    To show concrete examples, I want to avoid it for the sake of yourself, but it is very subtle, so it is shown below by mesh deformation.
    (The deformation is not perfect, as an example only ...)
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  • 5 years ago
    Only one thing.

    I saw the persona's picture, but it seems to be using Manga Perth
    I think that it became a picture with Perth somehow,
    Please think about whether the picture you want to draw is purse.

    Where do you want to make a picture looking from?

    The position of the shoulder is close to the picture "Looking at the overhead view (from above)".
    In that case, there is depth in the foot, so the body shrinks downwards.

    Just as I was looking directly in front and my face was flattening it,
    If it is a composition that it is oblique,
    You should lower your shoulder position and correct your height slightly.

    Looking down from the shoulder to the top, looking down from the shoulder to the bottom right,
    Even if this picture is corrected as it is, it does not come nicely and endless ...
    It is better to fix clothes etc. after deciding either.

    The black line is the front, the red line is the overhead view.
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  • 5 years ago
    There is a good thing to put one hand at a minimum as it is good, so I felt that SYN's way of doing it was OK.
    I think that change is a big task from here.

    Besides that, in P5's picture the painting of Mr. Sleigh is a bright system and the background is brighter and the back is sparsely open, so if you just put all your right hands on the right hand that made a "red pepper colored glove" over the red eyes "Gaze movement" goes out in the same way, so the composition fails color-wise.
    I thought that the composition would stabilize if you devised "background color" like the original like the original, or put effects such as lettering and patterns that have been lettering and persona-like coloring effects so that "gaze does not concentrate on hands" It was.
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  • 5 years ago
    Hello periodic,
    Thank you for your advice.
    Regarding my face I was confident as much as I could
    It is not long yet ... I will continue my pursuit.

    Hello> SYN,
    I was heading for a headlong face. I felt that Perth is still under-understanding
    Because there is no understanding and technology there, I think that such madness is going on.
    I would like to learn more about Perth. Thank you for your advice.

    > Mr. Usavison
    Consciousness was not suitable until gaze movement by color ....
    Because it seems that the composition of the first place is not able to see the pointed out from everyone
    First of all, I would like to reconsider from the part how to compose the composition as an illustration.
    Thank you for your advice.
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