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Is there anyone who can proofread this for me?

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Aslli

I've drawn a rough draft of a full-body illustration, but something feels off, so I'd like some feedback.

The part I'd like feedback on is the feet. I can't quite explain why, but something feels off about the right foot... I'm just not satisfied with it.

If you know of any helpful websites or resources, please let me know. Thank you.

Published date : 4 days ago

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heytaroh ◆

4 days ago
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Try out the poses you've drawn yourself.
When you try to recreate the poses you've drawn, you might find that they're a little unbalanced (unstable).

If it's a pose you can try out yourself, actually trying it out will give you some hints.
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綺紗(Kisa) ◆

4 days ago
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I think it would be a good idea to try using a drawing mannequin.

It might be helpful for observing the base of the right leg, the connection point with the torso, and how the lower leg (below the knee) looks when the leg is folded.
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animator

4 days ago
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This is a common pitfall for beginners who haven't mastered the fundamentals and try to draw solely from imagination without looking at anything – a "false drawing."

If you're unsure, look at a reference.

(In art school, students practice drawing models from various angles repeatedly to improve their skills.)

Right now, observation skills are more important than imagination.
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エ・ミ

3 days ago
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Excuse me for chiming in. This isn't a direct answer, but

First of all, ASK is not suitable for editing-type questions.

While I can provide answers that suggest the direction of your illustration, as the previous respondents have done,

Using your illustration (even if it's just a doodle) and adding to it or your creative work and posting it on ASK would violate CELSYS's terms of service by "infringing on the rights of other people's creative works." This could result in severe measures such as account suspension or termination, preventing you from using this platform with the same account.

That's why, as I mentioned earlier, ASK is "not suitable for editing-type questions."

https://www.celsys.com/information/celsys_terms/
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ミナト(トキハルト) ◆

3 days ago
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>E.M.

Regarding the information provided in your reply, I recommend contacting official support directly to be sure.

While ASK does have questions involving editing, if the submitted material is the poster's own work,
I believe that even temporary use of it would not be considered a violation of the terms of service.

Even for questions other than editing, for example, if someone is experiencing a problem and doesn't know how to operate something, they might attach screenshots of their PC screen.

In such cases, we might temporarily use those screenshots and add arrows to indicate the correct part.

However, since you cannot directly attach and post material that you do not own the copyright to in the question,
I believe that self-created derivative works would be subject to deletion according to ASK's terms of service.

If the management determines that your actions are problematic, I believe they will also issue a separate warning.

Account suspension or freezing without any notice seems unlikely.
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ミナト(トキハルト) ◆

2 days ago
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For editing-type questions, depending on the level of detail, if you're looking for something more professional, it's better to use a paid online service. Also, questions that are time-consuming tend to be overlooked.
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