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Advice on illustration please

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mochitabetai

About 5 years ago, I drew illustrations that were about to be graffitied in textbooks, but when thinking about the future I became interested in illustration work, so I bought a pen tab two months ago and did full-scale illustrations started. The illustration is quite a beginner. I'd like to improve more, but I'm not sure what's wrong, so I'd love to hear your advice.
Thank you m (_ _ "m)

Published date : 4 years ago

Updated date : 4 years ago

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100805150829 ◆

4 years ago
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Oh…! so cute…! How to paint is very devised and wonderful.
I tried to correct it. I'm sorry to be dirty

↓ In my opinion, advice.
・ Draw your hair with a slightly more natural curve
・ Add because Mitsumi has disappeared
・ Is it better to see the back collar?
・ In this state, I think it will bend slightly below the right arm
・ If the cheek is painted by a girl, is it better to bring it closer to the eyes?
・ Apply fine shadows to your hair for sharpness
・ Nice. cute.

Aside from the slight rattling of the line drawings, I think the shape and colors of the hands are very good.
After that, why don't you practice drawing line drawings a little carefully, how to draw mizuami, how to draw wrinkles on clothes, etc.
I think that if I do my best a little, I will be good soon. I think it will be absolute. Please do your best.
(I'm not good at drawing at all, so I don't know if it's helpful. I'm sorry if you look from the top.)
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mochitabetai

4 years ago

This answer will be the best answer.
It was a very easy-to-understand advice for everyone, and I got a lot of new knowledge in a short time.
Thank you to everyone who responded (person `` ▽ ｀)
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二ノ瀬泰徳ninoseyasunori ◆

4 years ago
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cute
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mochitabetai

4 years ago
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Ninose Yasunori, thank you for your comment.
I'm glad you said that
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100805150829 ◆

4 years ago
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Oh…! so cute…! How to paint is very devised and wonderful.
I tried to correct it. I'm sorry to be dirty

↓ In my opinion, advice.
・ Draw your hair with a slightly more natural curve
・ Add because Mitsumi has disappeared
・ Is it better to see the back collar?
・ In this state, I think it will bend slightly below the right arm
・ If the cheek is painted by a girl, is it better to bring it closer to the eyes?
・ Apply fine shadows to your hair for sharpness
・ Nice. cute.

Aside from the slight rattling of the line drawings, I think the shape and colors of the hands are very good.
After that, why don't you practice drawing line drawings a little carefully, how to draw mizuami, how to draw wrinkles on clothes, etc.
I think that if I do my best a little, I will be good soon. I think it will be absolute. Please do your best.
(I'm not good at drawing at all, so I don't know if it's helpful. I'm sorry if you look from the top.)
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mochitabetai

4 years ago
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Ao Chuno, thank you for your comment.
I learned with very easy-to-understand advice. Thank you for the image.
I'm not good at drawing wrinkles on clothes or drawing beautiful lines, so I'd like to practice mainly there.
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ｶｺﾁｬﾝ ◆

4 years ago
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It's so good that I don't think it's been two months since I started practicing ...
As personal advice, I think it's a good idea to be aware of the fact that hair clumps grow from the hairline. (It's strange in Japanese ...)
In the case of a girl, the area around the top of the head is a whip.
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けも ◆

4 years ago
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cute! !
I was worried that the braid seemed to come out from behind the chin
I could not draw well
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悪の東丈

4 years ago
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You may not like it because your pattern is solid
I tried to balance the size of the left and right eyes, eye to ear, ear to occipital, and neck.
Considering the collarbone, shoulders and back, I thought that the neck of the clothes passed through the center and the collar was out of balance.
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mochitabetai

4 years ago
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Thank you for answering Ran Kimoto.
I never thought about thinking about hair parts. We will consider it as a reference…!
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mochitabetai

4 years ago
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Thank you, Kemo.
Certainly, the braid comes out from under the chin ... I want to be careful when drawing next.
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mochitabetai

4 years ago
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Thank you for the evil Tojo-san.
The collar is completely off. When drawing illustrations, I often draw them with my own sense, so from now on, I would like to check the balance once, like the attached image.
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