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Is this character ok?
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❤tadami-san❤
❤tadami-san❤
Just my character. I did it in flat colour just so that you could see it without all the complicated bits.
Published date : 2 years ago
Updated date : 2 years ago
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2 years agoI really love the concept, btu may I give you some tips for your lineart? First off, I want to say that the hair lineart is perfect, as well as the coloring. But the lineart on the arms and hands seem a little bit off mainly because of the stiffness of your lines. I advise adding clothing wrinkles and folds to make it seem more natural. Another thing is the way that your lines cross over eachother seems a bit messy, so I would reccomend cleaning that up a bit. Lastly the neck and torso seem off a tiny bit. Not only is the neck a bit thick, but it's also kinda stiff and I reccomend adding a slight curve to the neck/shoulder area. Lastly is the torso. It's a nice smooth shape, but a little bit TOO smooth. I would highly reccomend addind a little bit of curve, and again light clothing folds to make it seem more natural. Other than those few things, I think you did wonderful, and I would love to see the finished product. <3
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