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I'm a beginner who hasn't trained enough after one month of experience in Clip Studio.
I drew a girl with chemo ears. I downloaded the material for the first time and used it in my painting.
However, it is difficult to balance my body, and when I try to draw a composition from an angle, it looks strange as if I was leaning forward.
Anything is fine, so if there is something wrong, please correct it and give me some advice. Thank you.
I drew a girl with chemo ears. I downloaded the material for the first time and used it in my painting.
However, it is difficult to balance my body, and when I try to draw a composition from an angle, it looks strange as if I was leaning forward.
Anything is fine, so if there is something wrong, please correct it and give me some advice. Thank you.
Published date : 2 years ago
Updated date : 2 years ago
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2 years agoIf you are struggling with balance and composition, you should try using 3D models, they aren't 100% what I would call anime style (which is what I think you are aiming for) but you can still get the general idea from them.
*You can find plenty of tutorials about 3D models by Clip Studio or many artists online- English
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2 years agoHello, this is Risa (* ´ω ｀)
Yeah, it's so cute! !! !! !! It's so cute! !! !! !! !! It's Usugi (゚ д ゚) Poker
The background is also fashionable and nice! !! !! !! !! I think the line drawing can be strong or weak.
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2 years agoFor the time being, please be aware of drawing in parallel.
I thought that the cause of the discomfort was that the direction of the head and the direction of the body did not match.
Twice
Based on the eyes.
It looked like it was seen from above, so the positions of the nose and mouth were adjusted.
Hair length is treated symmetrically.
I don't seem to have any special posture, so I was conscious of parallelism as well.
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2 years ago＞ Composition from an angle
Is it the feeling when you move diagonally from directly in front of the subject?
Or is it an image when viewed from diagonally above?
It looks like a bird's-eye view, so do you want to fix it?
I think the reason why your face is leaning forward is that it doesn't face the vertical body line.
Because my body is slanted to the right
It seems that the feeling of leaning forward can be suppressed if it is placed directly below.
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2 years agoThe feeling that the hood structure of the hoodie has not been decided.
The collar is a difficult part
There is also a case where 3Ⅾ object is used only for this part.
Because such a thing is distributed.
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2 years agoThere was a figure with a slightly similar angle
http://www.hasegawa-model.co.jp/hsite/wp-content/uploads/2019/08/SP438_5.jpg
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2 years agoI forgot to write my impressions.
I'm very good at it.
The place where the black line drawings are coordinated is cool like an anime-like character from the 1980s.
I was a little worried about the shape of the back of the head.
It may be a good idea to take the plunge and remove the shadows, and later, be aware of the wrinkles and scrape only the area around the shadows to organize them three-dimensionally.
That alone will improve the three-dimensional effect considerably (?).
First, I draw a line drawing and make it achromatic on another layer to make the whole character solid.
Good when drawn with line drawing! Even if you think about it, you may find that it is out of order just by adding a solid gray color, so I will fix it.
It is easier to cast shadows there in an achromatic color and boldly to adjust the three-dimensional shape near the shadows.
There is also an easy way to put the color from the upper layer so that it does not become dull with Grisaille enamel.
> When I try to draw a composition from an angle, I lean forward
It is easy to find a 3D drawing doll with a similar shape from ASSETS and mold it from there.
It may be good to drop several in advance and make a library.
There are some quirks, but if you get used to the molding method, you can make a reference material in a relatively short time.
Head size, shoulder width, waist size, leg length, etc. can be customized, so you can make various things.
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2 years agoThank you to Itsuki-san, Minato-san, Ninose-san, Usapyon-san, for your advice and corrections!
After all, I will try using 3D materials! Also, I was able to know various things that I didn't know about, such as being aware of the line and casting more shadows, so I will try it! Thank you for the appropriate correction.
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2 years agoIt's still difficult from diagonally above. Parker is also ugly, so I'm not confident at all.
It's terrible, but I made an animation painting at the end of the explanation of the previous answer (when I don't have time, I made an animation painting ...)
> There is also an easy way to put the color from the upper layer so that it does not become dull with Grisaille enamel.
This is the first figure.
I first painted it in gray and solid, then roughly painted the highlights in the bright areas with the screen folder, and then lightly shaded them with the multiplication folder.
Finally, I adjusted it so that it would not become Musai.
> When I try to draw a composition from an angle, I lean forward
If you get used to drawing from the side, you will be subject to the curse that you absolutely have to draw the neck, so if you look diagonally above, you may not be able to see the neck, so I made it a little.
It may be good to check various viewpoints with a 3D body, but I'm not used to it yet. Maybe I'll get used to it soon.
I think it's very common to buy the body of an articulated figure.
It may be difficult to take a selfie from diagonally above.
You have to face the camera and check it.
I think the design is quite different, so please take good care of rukapon's design as it is your own.
See you soon
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2 years agoI was planning to lower my left arm, but when I finished drawing, I was completely in the selfie system with a selfie stick 😏
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