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I wrote an ori-chara. It's been a long time since my computer was confiscated.
I wrote it to take a break, so I was able to do it very quickly.
I don't know what to fix because of that, but I don't know what to fix ...

I can't look up English right now, so it's very likely that I made a mistake.
I felt like I wanted to mean something like "I'm right".
There is no clear setting, I'm sorry.

Please give me some advice!

Published date : 2 years ago

Updated date : 2 years ago

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  • 2 years ago
    I really like the whole atmosphere.
    It has a very nice atmosphere with a story.
    Twice
    It ’s the same as the other people ’s opinions, but
    I feel scared at this rate, so I want a neck length.
    I think it would be nice if the facial expression had a strong feeling of courage.
    It is regrettable that the background and the person are the same darkness, so it is flat as a whole.
    As for the position of the hand, it seems that the center of the chest represents the heart.
    I hope I have the strength to challenge something, so I want the feeling of raising my eyes a little.
    The overall flat feeling becomes deeper when the density is changed.
    If you want to give a strong feeling without shaking your intentions, I think that the characters in a horizontal row will give you a more serious feeling.

    I tried to cut the picture, multiply the layers, and process it on the screen.
    I made a grayscale one with the original picture so that the color depth is easy to understand.
    I feel like I've put too much effort into it.

  • 2 years ago
    I'm sorry I was late to make it the best answer!
    Itsuki-san, of course, bivux-san, Mikiuchi-san, Kemo-san, Usa-san
    Thank you for your wonderful opinion!
    I will do my best to make the best use of the reflections I received from everyone!
    I'm really thankful to you!
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