Now that the illustration is complete, please correct, give advice, give us your impressions, and evaluate it.
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I feel like there's something strange about the proportions...? Is the proportions of the standing image strange (is she dwarfed or has a big head?)
I think her waist is too thin, but I think that's one of my "characteristics" (is it still strange?)
Does it give off the gentle vibe of a woman in her early 20s?
Also, I feel like the way she crosses her legs is unnatural, but I can't look at it objectively, so please point out what's strange about it. (I hope there's no particular problem...)
It's a monochrome illustration (I don't have any plans to color it at the moment), so please give me some advice if there's anything strange.
Published date : 1 month ago
Updated date : 1 month ago
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1 month agoI'm still a newbie, but if you don't mind...
I think having a slim waist is a good thing!
There are illustrators out there who draw slim figures, so be confident (*^^*)
There may be some points where you think it's not like that, but I hope you'll take a look at the before and after at the end.
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Message1 month agoThank you for all the corrections and comments. I was very hesitant, but I've decided to choose Toji Touya's correction as the best answer. I added a model doll based on Tenzen's advice! Thank you for Ninose's comments! Thank you also to Noborius! I'll keep working hard.
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