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Advice wanted!!!

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yuu_1105

I drew a girl eating a donut!
If you have any advice, please let me know!

Published date : 1 month ago

Updated date : 1 month ago

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冬至冬夜

1 month ago
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I'm still a newbie, but if you don't mind...

In After2, I made the hair on the right side the same as the left side

There may be some parts that seem different, but please bear with me m(_ _)m
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yuu_1105

1 month ago

Thanks to everyone, I think I was able to create a great picture! Thank you very much!
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Haimo

1 month ago
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This is a very cute illustration!
The neck seems too thick at the top compared to how thin it is at the base, so I think it would be good to adjust it to match the thinness of the base. It would also be good if the mouth was positioned a little lower. Also, I know this is difficult to correct, but I think the position of the hands more in front of the body would make the picture less linear.
Personally, I really like the way the eyelashes are drawn!
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yuu_1105

1 month ago
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Thank you @Haimo!! I'll try to fix it! Thank you for the compliment 😭!
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amera

1 month ago
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Nice to meet you. I was concerned about the following points.
- The hole in the donut is too small, so it's hard to tell it's a donut.
- Even though he's eating a delicious food like a donut, his expression is grim (probably because his face is wrinkled).
I think it would be a better picture if you could write a story about why he's eating a donut.
In the current illustration, he has a grim, brave expression on his face, so how about adding tears or a broken heart to the background to make it look like he's eating in despair after a broken heart.
Also, as mentioned in the previous comment, I'm concerned about the balance of his body. I'm sure you have a favorite illustrator, so if you draw by looking at the work of someone you respect, I think the balance will work out.
Good luck!
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冬至冬夜

1 month ago
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I'm still a newbie, but if you don't mind...

In After2, I made the hair on the right side the same as the left side

There may be some parts that seem different, but please bear with me m(_ _)m
- Japanese