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I would be happy if you could reduce this picture (´；ω；｀)!

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すーみゃん

As the title says, I would be happy if you could cut down this picture (´；ω；｀)! I actually wanted to express transience and emotion, but it didn't work out. I think the body is probably very strange, so I would be happy if you could fix this picture.

Published date : 13 days ago

Updated date : 7 days ago

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冬至冬夜

13 days ago
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I'm still a newbie, but if you don't mind...
I know it's analog and difficult, but please do your best ٩( 'ω' )و
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すーみゃん

7 days ago

Thank you so much! I'll choose this as the best answer!
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ぽんこつラーメン_

13 days ago
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Are you talking about corrections?
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すーみゃん

13 days ago
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Yes!
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megane7

13 days ago
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I guess you're talking about corrections.
The most noticeable thing is that the legs look different lengths. I think the right thigh (knee) is too short.
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すーみゃん

13 days ago
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Thank you
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すーみゃん

13 days ago
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Is it like this?
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ぽんこつラーメン_

13 days ago
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I think what megane7 is trying to say is that it would be better to make the height of the thighs (the length from the waist to the knees) of the right and left legs the same. In the illustration after it was redrawn, that didn't seem to have changed much.
If you want to make it look like the leg is slightly bent, I think it would be better to draw the back leg (the right leg, the shoe part) higher up as well. (To make the calf lengths the same.)
Sorry for my lack of vocabulary.
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(･-･っ)3

13 days ago
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I apologize for being someone with no track record. I understand that you wanted to convey "ephemerality and emotion," but you also seemed concerned about the balance of the body, so I made some temporary corrections to the feet, which are particularly noticeable.
First of all, here are the parts that I thought were good:
・The whole body is drawn well
・The proportions are solid
・It's based on an image (ephemerality and emotion)
・The face is cute

The only thing that's unfortunate is that the image took precedence and the balance is slightly off.
(I tried lowering the position of the knee in the back) If it's a front-facing illustration, when the knees are bent, the left and right sides will be roughly the same height. This will naturally make the length below the knees the same, so if you look for the ideal shape, you may find a pattern that suits your taste. Also, if you imagine ephemerality, if "girl," "rain," and "umbrella" come to mind, it's a good idea to think about the scene, such as "how the girl is feeling as she stands there." Depending on the girl's feelings, you can change the pose or the weather and still be "emotional"!
Sorry for just passing by, but thank you for the wonderful illustration.
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TENZEN

13 days ago
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Sometimes it overlaps with other people's work, but it's generally as shown in the image.
Technically, I could redraw it based on the original picture, but then in the end it would just be what I think is right, and I think the biggest problem is that the artist himself doesn't know what kind of look he wants to go for.
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冬至冬夜

13 days ago
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I'm still a newbie, but if you don't mind...
I know it's analog and difficult, but please do your best ٩( 'ω' )و
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すーみゃん

12 days ago
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Thank you so much ( ӹᯅӹ ) I am so grateful!
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すーみゃん

12 days ago
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With everyone's help, the draft ended up looking like this ✨ ️! All that's left now is to add the pants, clothes, and background!
Thank you so much, Toji Touya, Jekiraku, and megane7 ( ӹᯅӹ ) 💓
⬇️⬇️⬇️
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すーみゃん

12 days ago
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It's finished! The face has become darker due to the eraser, but
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冬至冬夜

12 days ago
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It's gotten a lot better (*^^*)
I'm glad it was helpful
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